Rate our new website

[John_Phoenix]

Your website could use some work, contact us at, redi.co.za

We have great rates and are redi to assist you in making your business a success!

Sandton is tough, but we're tougher! with so many second rate design *cough* studios on every corner, pimpin ain't easy. But at redi we keep it 100 (BMW not included).

We offer a wide variety of top tier talent, at low low prices, lower than the suspension on your cousins Honda.

High quality, fast and cheap, and better looking than the competition (at ftv on a Saturday night)

Why delay, get redi to do it, today.

 

[Bryn]

Your website could use some work, contact us at, redi.co.za

We have great rates and are redi to assist you in making your business a success!

Sandton is tough, but we're tougher! with so many second rate design *cough* studios on every corner, pimpin ain't easy. But at redi we keep it 100 (BMW not included).

We offer a wide variety of top tier talent, at low low prices, lower than the suspension on your cousins Honda.

High quality, fast and cheap, and better looking than the competition (at ftv on a Saturday night)

Why delay, get redi to do it, today.

Just a heads up that your site isn't rendering great on mobile. The pricing page in particular is all over.

 

[Milano]

So a few months ago i created a post asking for advice on how to get business in the web development space. The thread ended up just being a discussion on how bad our site was. It was a bit of a shock since I was quite proud of it at the time. But luckily I was thick skinned enough to find the constructive comments and go back to the drawing board. Let us know what you think.

Old site: https://pixelfriendly.co.za/wordpress/
New site: https://pixelfriendly.co.za/

P.S. Don't mark us down too poorly on our portfolio, we haven't applied our new skill set to any clients yet.
P.P.S. We are still struggling for work. Any advice to getting clients would be helpful.

Not far to go now:

- double line space each and every wall of text.

- still many grammatical errors.

- own the design. Still looks like a template. 'Brand' each category/segment to strengthen your identity.

- never use 'coming soon'.

- use a call to action for every segment e.g. 'get started'. Go even further: Adapt all existing wording to convey actionable concepts. The tone is currently too passive to be convincing.

- push 5 immediate sign-up products. One might be a logo design package for example.

- Not 100% convinced about your logo. But not completely against it either.