My dad doesnt like the website i built him

What is going on with all those logos that don't have transparent backgrounds?

If you are too lazy to fix the logos...then at least make the background white. If that alone gets fixed the site will look 100 times better and less amateur.
 
I can honestly say that if I found that website by accident I certainly wouldn't pursue business with them for the following services because the website screams that they aren't very good at doing it.

• Business planning
• General business advisory services
• Content write-ups
• Entrepreneurship training

The other options I would possibly maybe consider...but if I found someone else with a better website they would never ever get an email.

• Accounting and bookkeeping
• Tax services
• Registrations and compliances

Also "compliances" is not a word.
 
gregmcc said:
Under services. Needs some paragraphs added.
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Oh dear it gets even worse on that tab.

Content Write-Ups & Website Setups
We will tell your story or idea in a simple-to-understand, “dejargonised” language that is clear, specific and bold. We will take your readers on the journey that you have travelled and/or are travelling and convey it in clear messages that entertain and educate.
We know that your brand, sales and reputation are the reasons for your existence – so we will fashion make the write-up to appeal to those in search of the truth in your industry or area of business. The content will be so compelling that it becomes easy prey to the hunters on the web. It is important that whatever text you post out there tells your story in such a way that your target market gets the big picture. We write different articles for in-depth readers and for scanners or for both, as you direct us.
Our content writing services to businesses and individuals include:
• Website content

OBVIOUSLY NOT!
 
both the original and the current are terrible.

it's the most easily accessible public face of your company FFS
 
FINALLY - I now know what those guys with their "5 page website - R1500" on gumtree produce !!!!!

I've always wondered .......
 
Sorry to say this, but the new site is horrendous with those colours. And it looks even worse on an HD-screen with that full-width text.

Wow.

--EDIT--

Actually, to add to this: a source of the problem is that logo, which is really not good at all. A good logo would have inspired a better site. Plain and simple.
 
Its a good site i am still pushing for it to be the one he chooses
 
cerebus said:
I admit it doesn't look great. The beige and blue is doing nothing for me. But it is a considerable improvement over your efforts. I'm just sorry that Thor187's time got wasted.
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+1. Dad went with another designer with no sense for aesthetic. Can't believe people get paid to do work like that.
 
To follow up on my previous post:

I may not be the greatest logo designer, but would this not inspire and/or promote a better website design?

mgtassist.png
 
I know I am a bit late and you probably changed a lot already but here is some in put on how it looks now. Small

#FF9900
#0066FF
OR
#669900
#0066FF
Above is my options for the two site colors.

Try putting the clients with a white background.

Try putting the images in the slider with a border. - I am not sure what kind of border.

Why didn't you make the favecon as the biz part of the icon?

The white and dark grey/black text seems a bit harsh. Try making the white and dark grey/black a bit softer.

Other than that I think thumbs up!

P.S. With the boring crap like tax, do you really think people look at how awesome the website looks? The question is: "Can you save and/or make me money?"

P.P.S. People who would Whatsapp to do business, don't have money.
 
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