Telkom still trying to touch tomorrow

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Quite a badly written article, couldn't make past the 4th paragraph.
 
I see it's been mentioned already, but the writing in this article is just terrible. Really makes me not want to read it.
 
Telkom (still trying to touch tomorrow, which is proving harder than touching their competitors) out with a trading update this morning, it is most certainly a complicated thing, that is for sure. :wtf::confused:
 
Was it translated into one language, then the other?

I stopped reading after the 2nd paragraph.

Syntax and grammar just is wrong, and it takes a lot of effort to think on what is meant there.

So I'll rate this article a 1 on a scale of 1 to 10 where 1=poor and 10=excellent.
 
Favourite Sasha quote:

Sasha said:
I have been asking around, please do the same, do you know anyone who has a contract yet?
 
Telkom (still trying to touch tomorrow, which is proving harder than touching their competitors) out with a trading update this morning, it is most certainly a complicated thing, that is for sure.
Clearly this is not a sentence. If I had a stick I'd poke it with that and see if it makes a noise and perhaps find out what it is that way.

Journalists who start a paragraph with "And" should be shot on sight. I got grief for that once too...in grade 6.

Seriously RPM, MoneyWeb has a bunch of cool articles written in English. Lets have one of those.
 
my synopsis of the article is (big drum roll) ......... HUH?
I mean wtf with all the ZAR's? it just seemed like a bunch of waffle thrown together after a bit of ZOL :/
 
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