Article Mistake corrections

Car_B_OM said:
In the article: https://businesstech.co.za/news/bus...-can-fix-roads-then-charge-government-for-it/

Paragraph 3: 'and civil society group' should be 'civil society groups'

Paragraph 1 and 5: Date formats are not consistent

Paragraph 6: 'persons' should be 'people' (according to the OED, 'persons' is used in legal or formal contexts to refer to a unspecified individual, in SA law, 'persons' refers to a distinct legal entity under the Law of Persons.)

Paragraph 6: 'on a case by basis' should be 'on a case by case basis'
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Thanks, it has been fixed.
 
German court the Bundesgerichtshof sided with Blizzard after it argued that bots damage the game for legitimate players by providing an unearned and unfair mechanical advantage.
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The German supreme court, the Bundesgerichtshof , sided with....
I am going to be a terrible scholar and link Wikipedia:
The Federal Court of Justice (German: Bundesgerichtshof, BGH) in Karlsruhe is the highest court in the system of ordinary jurisdiction (ordentliche Gerichtsbarkeit) in Germany. It is the supreme court (court of last resort) in all matters of criminal and private law
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Federal_Court_of_Justice
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From the article thread for this article.

That article needs a serious round of proofing. Just the ones that jumped out:

The shopping centre that the richest city in Africa is now built around.he Monolith. Sandton City.
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Despite the many obstacles of the Apartheid government, Richard Maponya became a beacon of hope to the people of Soweto, starting several successful business in the area (predominantly in the retail and property space).
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Chestnut was known for winning races his by large margins
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Her company has since gone onto transform the luxury residential landscape in South Africa
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His company went onto change
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In December he invested in a B$1-billion fund
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Any reason your MIT articles don't follow the Terms of Use as laid out on the MIT site?
Example: https://mybroadband.co.za/news/gadgets/205320-a-faster-single-pixel-camera.html

From the MIT Terms of Use:
I. Electronic media

MIT News, a Web site run by the MIT News Office, offers RSS feeds for syndication purposes. All MIT News stories republished on third-party sites must include:
1.) At the top of the story: the headline, sub-headline, author's byline, and a citation of "MIT News" that links to the original story on the MIT News site;
2.) At the bottom of the story: the words "Reprinted with permission of MIT News" 3.) and a link to the MIT News homepage (http://news.mit.edu/);

https://news.mit.edu/terms-of-use
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1.) Your top MIT news link links back to mybb, not to the MIT article.
2.) You're missing "Reprinted with permission of MIT News" at the bottom.
3.) Bottom link to point to MIT homepage, not to the story.
 
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The latest competition - Cool giveaway: Redmi 2, Wi-Fi Range Extender, and a Mystery Gadget

The end date is the past.
 
Dan C said:
The latest competition - Cool giveaway: Redmi 2, Wi-Fi Range Extender, and a Mystery Gadget

The end date is the past.
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Thanks. As with previous competitions it was meant to close this Friday. The OP has been corrected.
 
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