Article Mistake corrections

[Jan]

http://businesstech.co.za/news/government/42336/r100-billion-needed-for-sa-broadband/

Fixed, thanks.

 

[Jan]

:erm:

http://mybroadband.co.za/news/government/82465-nelson-mandela-gets-smart-id-card.html

We don't usually fix Sapa's copy, but I couldn't leave that in there after seeing it. Fixed.

 

[Maverick Jester]

In this article: http://mybroadband.co.za/news/gadgets/82741-apple-testing-bigger-iphones-ipads.html

The line should read as follows, for the sake of accuracy:

The current iPads sport screens of 7.9 and 9.7 inches.

 

[supersunbird]

http://mybroadband.co.za/vb/showthread.php/546695-Cyber-crime-costs-world-up-to-USD500-billion-study

Cyber-crime costs world up to USD500-billion: study

Apple is testing iPhones and iPads with larger screens as it seeks to keep intensifying competition at bay

Sense not make...

 

[supersunbird]

http://mybroadband.co.za/vb/showthread.php/546695-Cyber-crime-costs-world-up-to-USD500-billion-study



Sense not make...

You really havent fixed this yet? Then I guess its right and Apples testing of iPhones and iPads with larger screens costs the world up to USD500-billion due to enabling cybercrime? Who'd have thunk it!?

 

[bdt]

I usspect that the new Ubuntu Edge concept phone isn't (but I suspect would be more than hardy enough to) break any actual, physical records. But it may well be record-breaking; id est this is about hyphenation, and its conspicuous absence here. This applies to both the article and the thread.

 

[bdt]

Oh Jan, old buddy, old pal .you flubbed just a little bit on your Lumia 1020 article; specifically with "Elop went on to explain that Nokia has combined its 41MP PureView camera with optic imaging stabilisation (OIS) in the Nokia Lumia 1020." That should be optical image stabilisation.

 

[InTheCube]

http://mybroadband.co.za/news/broadband/83041-afrihost-mobile-plans-revealed.html

Afrihost posted the following ‘Out of Contract’ mobile data comparison, aiming to creating hype about what users can expect from them.

 

[jes]

Fixed, thanks.

 

[InTheCube]

http://businesstech.co.za/news/elec...ake-meaningful-impact-on-electric-car-market/

Limited driving ranges, high prices and relatively Spartan interiors have hobbled demand for electric vehicles made the other car makers with including Nissan Motor Co Ltd, General Motors Corp. and Ford Motor Co.. Edmunds.com predicts electric cars will account for 0.1 percent of the U.S. market this year, 1.1 percent in 2017 and 2.3 percent by 2020.

Spartan should be lowercase. Rest of the sentence got turned into spaghetti.

 

[InTheCube]

http://mybroadband.co.za/news/smart...i-active-zoom-sa-prices-new-launch-dates.html

In the table, the specs for the S4 Zoom and S4 mini seem to have been swapped.

 

[Jan]

In the table, the specs for the S4 Zoom and S4 mini seem to have been swapped.

Epic fail. I've fixed it.

 

[Maverick Jester]

In this article: http://mybroadband.co.za/news/gadgets/82741-apple-testing-bigger-iphones-ipads.html

The line should read as follows, for the sake of accuracy:

This one hasn't been fixed either...

 

[Jan]

This one hasn't been fixed either...

We don't usually alter Sapa's copy, but I couldn't help myself so I fixed it.

 

[Maverick Jester]

We don't usually alter Sapa's copy, but I couldn't help myself so I fixed it.

Thanks.

 

[Wall]

businesstech.co.za/news/mobile/44595/cell-c-admits-network-taking-strain/

Knott-Craig addsed that Cell C will continue to
roll out new sites, upgrade and optimise existing
sites and add additional capacity across its
network nationally.

Added

 

[jes]

Fixed, thanks.

 

[Shake&Bake]

He said that there may be a case against the city for exposing its residents’ private date.

"data" perhaps?

http://mybroadband.co.za/news/security/85099-you-may-be-guilty-in-city-of-joburg-security-leak.html

 

[liquidbread]

http://mybroadband.co.za/news/gadgets/85525-samsung-galaxy-tab-3-10-1-prices-in-south-africa.html

Specifications table. Galaxy Tab 3 10.1 should be 10" screensize instead of the 7 inch indicated

 

[InTheCube]

http://mybroadband.co.za/news/adsl/86003-capped-versus-uncapped-adsl.html

Uncapped services can bring cost savings for low monthly usage, and is also seen as offering a better network performance than uncapped products.

Bold words should be changed to capped

“The choice between capped and uncapped ADSL depends on what you want to spend, or if you want to actively manage the number of gigs you want to use. Both services are offer brilliant experiences,” he added.

are should be removed.

“When we cannot guarantee this quality due to unknown demand from cheap uncapped offerings we prefer <?> resell other Telco’s products rather <?> to impact our network.”

Words missing at placeholders I inserted <?>. Should probably be to and than